WALT: Write a letter using a character description.
How I managed o write this letter from price
First, I did some research about the character and scenes he fought in like Russia. I also learned that captain price had fought mostly in every war. it was hard to describe the Russians, but I still manage to describe the Russians.
I used this website to get my information about price
Tell me what u think about this website.
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Hello, family right now I'm at base gathering resources and supplies for the big war in Russia.
I hope I can see you again. But don't worry I got roach and soap on my side ghost is here for backup too. I won't be back for a long I'm kind of angry because we are needing backup. But we have to defend the choppers first because they are shooting RPGs at our backup helicopters. It's also really cold in Russia so we have to attack the right moment. I hope you are safe at home I'll be back soon. Love Price
These stupid Russians have blue eyes like the dead sky his body is big like a truck his eyebrows are small as a pipe his angry mouth is small as a stick.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Luke,
ReplyDeleteI can see you really got the hang of using similes, nice one. You also did a good job of telling us what was happening where you were. Next time it would be cool if you included a few more 'show not tell' sentences to describe the action.
I do really enjoy this piece because all the information is relevant to the story.
Keep up the good work Luke.
Hi this is Rhumour and Riley,
ReplyDeleteWe like the way you used heaps of information. How you explained your steps and followed the blog template
Kind regards